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Hot reflection cold and still
The Barbie doll looks pale and ill
Sad hatred loving every vein
Magazine models of pain
Nothing left to lose but me
Can’t trust the monster that I see
All I’m destined to create
This reflection swelling with hate
You ask, tearful, to stop this game
Every move, I’m sagging with shame
Losing no matter what I do
I can’t love me, even for you
Attention seeker, they call me
They don’t see all I could be
Shattered, sad in my reflection
Hungering for my attention
Stomach heaves with a thousand sins
Finish what I didn’t begin
These scars worse than any bruise
They told me I’d nothing to lose
Please, I need to face quietly
I can’t know that you love me
Soon you’ll be free of my distress
Free of the girl who grew less and less
The Barbie doll looks pale and ill
Sad hatred loving every vein
Magazine models of pain
Nothing left to lose but me
Can’t trust the monster that I see
All I’m destined to create
This reflection swelling with hate
You ask, tearful, to stop this game
Every move, I’m sagging with shame
Losing no matter what I do
I can’t love me, even for you
Attention seeker, they call me
They don’t see all I could be
Shattered, sad in my reflection
Hungering for my attention
Stomach heaves with a thousand sins
Finish what I didn’t begin
These scars worse than any bruise
They told me I’d nothing to lose
Please, I need to face quietly
I can’t know that you love me
Soon you’ll be free of my distress
Free of the girl who grew less and less
Arg. Sincere apologies.
Um...about anorexia. It's from first person perspective, but NOT about about me, for those who don't know me.
Started off as "oppsites" a subject given to me, but then it trailed of into...this. :/
Um yeah...enjoy?
Um...about anorexia. It's from first person perspective, but NOT about about me, for those who don't know me.
Started off as "oppsites" a subject given to me, but then it trailed of into...this. :/
Um yeah...enjoy?
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well done.
difficult subject. good poem. I don't think there's a way to write about this from 3/person..why not try?
Anyway, well done again ++fav
faith, h.xox
difficult subject. good poem. I don't think there's a way to write about this from 3/person..why not try?
Anyway, well done again ++fav
faith, h.xox